Week 11 Peer Review

Week 11 Peer Reviews

Jamie

Great job on the lead in paragraph that eventually leads to the revelation that we will be in a cemetery. It was drawn out perfectly to build interest in the piece.

In the Bus Ride writings I noticed a lot more of the psychological components of the characters than I did the actual writing style. Great job on both writings.

Kayla

I thoroughly enjoyed the excellent descriptions included in your posts this week. I had a difficult time identifying with the writings and characters in all three of your posts this week but was amazed by the beauty and style you used throughout writing them.

Kimberly

I particularly like the way you intro your stories, the backstory approach provides very helpful insight to the story I am about to read. Excellent work. You used concepts and ideas that can be related to by almost anyone and the beautiful and eloquent style of writing makes for great reading.