Week 10 Peer Review
Hey all, hope you had a great break!
Jamie
I enjoyed your calm persuasion piece particularly for its balance. You handled a difficult topic in what I believe was a fair manner. You stated your argument or opinion firmly without being overbearing or argumentative. I feel this would be an easy topic to rant about but you managed to convey acceptance of others views but your opposition of them forcing them on to others without even throwing in any FU’s. Nice job writing about a controversial subject.
Kayla
Ok this is off to a great start, the art of procrastination, that is an awesome subject and the intro paragraph is very well written. That was so very entertaining, hilarious and well written, thank you I needed that. Not a complaint I can come up with this week, you nailed it on all counts. Your use of sarcasm and the use of asking questions and then answering them is very effective and engaging. Free exercise procrastination- priceless J
Kimberly
Your writing from last week is excellent. I particularly like your use of facts and figures to back up or reinforce your subject. This seems to be an effective war to give the reader an even greater understanding of your subjects to compliment the very passionate and descriptive narration you use. And I also like any story that uses the word backasswardJ Great job
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